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xingjing1112 2009-5-18 19:47

这是不是那篇文章的后续啊??怎么没头没尾的?内容倒是不错。

狐狸天使紫娴 2009-8-4 20:01

听说是《红映残阳》的片段,LZ有《红映残阳》的全集吗?想看,谢谢LZ

jjwang1017 2009-8-4 20:04

这么短?
只是个节选?
要全的啊,楼主加油

xj19860925 2009-8-4 20:39

应该是节选吧
场景切换上有几个地方很明显接不上
楼主能把全文发上来吗?

kokijin 2009-8-5 01:44

看得我感觉很混乱
人名都感觉对不上号呢?

zy19830130 2009-8-5 21:34

是好文,但好像是节选,能不能发个全本上来。

菊花韬 2009-8-6 14:24

很喜欢这类小说的,文笔和情节都很好,但是不是很尽兴啊,太短了点

wolf810920 2009-8-7 00:09

还不错,其实我最想去小说的那个世界,有性奴隶卖啊,想想就爽

vfrrfv789987 2009-8-7 01:35

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wj33222211 2009-8-7 14:29

有头无尾,不过都算精彩了,或者即使看全文也不过如此,但总是希望能看到全文。

江大侠 2009-8-7 15:18

要全本啊,加油啊,支持你速度速度速度速度

风之守望者 2009-8-7 17:51

也是一篇老文乐,以前看过,个人偏好熟女,不过不喜欢虐

jack12153 2009-8-8 17:50

像是片段,从哪里节选出来的,希望楼主能发全了。

zyclf 2009-8-8 23:42

应该是《红映残阳》的节选。相当不错,希望能发全部。

gaogao0887 2009-8-9 00:32

好文就是有点缺少,就好能发个齐全的就好了

a635981775a 2009-8-9 00:42

一口气看下去了,感觉不错,但是怎么感觉只是一部分,是不是还有完整的,老大行行好,下次发全了

炫烂流星 2009-8-9 07:33

这应该是宫廷内斗吧,不过看上去好像没写完啊
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