xingjing1112 2009-5-18 19:47
这是不是那篇文章的后续啊？？怎么没头没尾的？内容倒是不错。
狐狸天使紫娴 2009-8-4 20:01
听说是《红映残阳》的片段，LZ有《红映残阳》的全集吗？想看，谢谢LZ
jjwang1017 2009-8-4 20:04
这么短？
只是个节选？
要全的啊，楼主加油
xj19860925 2009-8-4 20:39
应该是节选吧
场景切换上有几个地方很明显接不上
楼主能把全文发上来吗？
zy19830130 2009-8-5 21:34
是好文，但好像是节选，能不能发个全本上来。
菊花韬 2009-8-6 14:24
很喜欢这类小说的，文笔和情节都很好，但是不是很尽兴啊，太短了点
wolf810920 2009-8-7 00:09
还不错，其实我最想去小说的那个世界，有性奴隶卖啊，想想就爽
vfrrfv789987 2009-8-7 01:35
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vfrrfv789987 2009-8-7 01:36
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wj33222211 2009-8-7 14:29
有头无尾，不过都算精彩了，或者即使看全文也不过如此，但总是希望能看到全文。
风之守望者 2009-8-7 17:51
也是一篇老文乐，以前看过，个人偏好熟女，不过不喜欢虐
zyclf 2009-8-8 23:42
应该是《红映残阳》的节选。相当不错，希望能发全部。
gaogao0887 2009-8-9 00:32
好文就是有点缺少，就好能发个齐全的就好了
a635981775a 2009-8-9 00:42
一口气看下去了，感觉不错，但是怎么感觉只是一部分，是不是还有完整的，老大行行好，下次发全了